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Huntik13 on 13th Apr 2021, 9:08 PM

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NO, VEN!! T0T Norden, that's scum! For the all the elves' arrogant, self-righteous views, their so-called prince isn't is really no better than the Winged they detested so much! XP

SILGHT SUGGESTION: In the first panel, trying tweaking Ven's "Kill me" line to something like "Just kill me!" or "Just kill me already!" It's grammatically correct, so it's depends on what you want to do and want to convey.

Ink-Mix Studio on 13th Apr 2021, 10:18 PM

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Thanks for the suggestion, Huntik13! <3