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Huntik13 on 6th Oct 2020, 4:50 PM

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Aww, Taavi is such a good boy! =^-^= Ven too! Taavi's expression in the last is sad! T0T

SILGHT ERROR: In the second panel, Ven's speech bubble needs to be tweak. Change "You did right" to "You did THE right THING."

Add "be" between "will" and "if" in the last sentence.

Ink-Mix Studio on 6th Oct 2020, 8:28 PM

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Thanks!