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Huntik13 on 16th Sep 2020, 1:13 AM

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Sheesh, here comes Raskin's sense of tactlessness! And there fighting again! V^^ It's hard to say to whether Taavi can match up with Norden, but I think Taavi learning to use his powers is a good thing overall.

SLIGHT ERRORS: It the second panel, change "Dad" to "Father". Raskin always uses the word "Father" when speaking about Norden to Taavi.

In the third panel, tweak the first half of the speech bubble so it would look like this, "He won't listen to you! He won't talk to you!"

Ink-Mix Studio on 16th Sep 2020, 10:29 AM

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Thanks for the corrections! I didn't change the word "dad" because, in that case, Raskin was mocking Taavi.

Huntik13 on 18th Sep 2020, 11:12 PM

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Understood! You're welcome!