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Huntik13 on 21st Jul 2020, 5:22 PM

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The war of the Gods and the Essentials, the Scourge, and Goddess Phry'ra's purpose ....Goodness, what a mystery! I hope all the answers will reveal themselves soon! ^0^

SLIGHT ERRORS: Last panel, in Nox's speech bubble change "neither" to "not even" and delete the "herself". So the sentence could flow like this: "Probably because not even the Elves' Goddess was able to destroy that thing."

In Khedri's speech bubble, revise the first half so it will read as this: "Or maybe she thought the Scourge could be used for future purposes..."

Ink-Mix Studio on 21st Jul 2020, 8:37 PM

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Thanks, Huntik13!

Huntik13 on 22nd Jul 2020, 4:04 AM

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You're welcome!