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Ink-Mix Studio on 29th May 2020, 4:06 PM

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He asked for it XD



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Huntik13 on 29th May 2020, 5:14 PM

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Awww~! Such sweet words from such usually gruff and scary man! =^-^=

SLIGHT ERRORS: In the 5th panel, change "And even though he doesn't realize that..." to "And even though he doesn't realize IT..."

Last panel, add a comma after the word "Jewels".

Ink-Mix Studio on 29th May 2020, 5:45 PM

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Thank you, Huntik13! <3

Huntik13 on 30th May 2020, 2:15 AM

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Happy to help! ^-^