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Huntik13 on 22nd Feb 2020, 2:59 AM

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Ohh, a color page! =0o0= It's been a while since I saw one! So, Khedri just ran away from home! That will come and bite him in the butt...

SLIGHT ERRORS: First bubble, the first sentence can flow better. Try writing it as "I should have left a letter so Dad wouldn't worry ABOUT ME."

In the first bubble of last panel, the sentence should be "Why can't I think ABOUT him without my chest FEELING like it's about to explode?!"

Ink-Mix Studio on 22nd Feb 2020, 7:10 PM

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Thank you, Huntik13!

Huntik13 on 25th Feb 2020, 10:15 PM

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No problem! ^-^